Vatican City and Recovery’s Ending
That crazy old guy~
NINETEEN THOUSAND FOUR HUNDRED AND TWENTY ONE WORDS I AM FINISHED TAKE IT AND LEAVE
I didn’t actually know how long this chapter was.
I had 3 beta-readers take 9-10 pages each and proof-read them for me, keeping only the first and last segments for myself. (which would give me the 40 pages staring me in the face right now)
If I sent the first 10 pages of this chapter to someone (more like first 15), would they be willing to spelling/grammar check it while also being a good person and highlighting ANY areas in the prose where the words don’t work properly? (awkward phrases, run-ons, etc.)
hell I might even need like two people.
he said the thing
Suddenly not sure if I need the very last scene in this chapter or not.
I mean I’d love to resolve Italy’s issue with art but… like…
This is a really great finale sequence and the one that was gonna come after it was just
I was working on Recovery from 9-1 last night
and then for some reason I got up at 6:30 this morning and I’ve been working on it ever since with it now being 11.
I have to go to work soon but I’m so…
DID IT PROPERLY THIS TIME
LISTEN TO THIIIIS
*cries over what she did to her nice pilot*
Status Update because I’m going to bed
Elysium looks like:
- Pt. 1: Done
- Pt. 2: Done.
- Pt. 3: Done.
- Pt. 4: Done.
- Pt. 5: Done.
- Pt. 6: HUMANS ARE AWFUL CREATURES
- Pt. 7: Done. Not deleting it it’s good.
- Pt. 8: Core Scene half done.
- Pt. 9: Core scene not started.
I don’t know why there were 10 parts last night because I’m counting now and there are only nine. I deleted nothing.
ALFRED’S SCENE ALONE IS NINE PAGES YOU BASTARD
*another live-blog post*
currently at 29 pages / 13,200 words.
I’m gonna die tell my family I love them