[Story takes an unexpected turn and readers complain (Fanfic Flamingo) laugh at them]
I think some readers don’t realize… this is a writer’s story. You can complain all you want, it won’t change the story.
FINALLY FINISH THE SERIES YOU’VE SPENT THE LAST YEAR WRITING (Fanfic Flamingo) MUSE GIVES YOU ANOTHER PLOT BUNNY FOR THE SERIES
HetaOni: Recovery, Chapter 40, "Elysium"
Completed.
NINETEEN THOUSAND FOUR HUNDRED AND TWENTY ONE WORDS I AM FINISHED TAKE IT AND LEAVE
omfg
I didn’t actually know how long this chapter was.
I had 3 beta-readers take 9-10 pages each and proof-read them for me, keeping only the first and last segments for myself. (which would give me the 40 pages staring me in the face right now)
The
last
scene
is
12
pages
Small PSA?
If I sent the first 10 pages of this chapter to someone (more like first 15), would they be willing to spelling/grammar check it while also being a good person and highlighting ANY areas in the prose where the words don’t work properly? (awkward phrases, run-ons, etc.)
because it’s
really big
and
hell I might even need like two people.
he said the thing

Suddenly not sure if I need the very last scene in this chapter or not.
I mean I’d love to resolve Italy’s issue with art but… like…
This is a really great finale sequence and the one that was gonna come after it was just
soft
I was working on Recovery from 9-1 last night
and then for some reason I got up at 6:30 this morning and I’ve been working on it ever since with it now being 11.
I have to go to work soon but I’m so…
DID IT PROPERLY THIS TIME
LISTEN TO THIIIIS
*cries over what she did to her nice pilot*
Status Update because I’m going to bed
Elysium looks like:
- Pt. 1: Done
- Pt. 2: Done.
- Pt. 3: Done.
- Pt. 4: Done.
- Pt. 5: Done.
- Pt. 6: HUMANS ARE AWFUL CREATURES
- Pt. 7: Done. Not deleting it it’s good.
- Pt. 8: Core Scene half done.
- Pt. 9: Core scene not started.
I don’t know why there were 10 parts last night because I’m counting now and there are only nine. I deleted nothing.
ALFRED’S SCENE ALONE IS NINE PAGES YOU BASTARD
*another live-blog post*
currently at 29 pages / 13,200 words.
I’m gonna die tell my family I love them